I made a comment about the story "The Price Of Freedom - Chapter One" on Wattpad:This chapter’s good but you have some sort of problems when it comes to commas. I think you’re using commas sometimes and not periods.11,164 people have read this on WattpadRead Now

I made a comment about the story "The Price Of Freedom - Chapter One" on Wattpad:

This chapter’s good but you have some sort of problems when it comes to commas. I think you’re using commas sometimes and not periods.


11,164 people have read this on Wattpad
Read Now